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posted October 22nd, 2014, 10:56 pm


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October 22nd, 2014, 10:56 pm

Larkie

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I really really really don't know anything about guns.

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October 22nd, 2014, 11:23 pm

Ty (Guest)

typo?

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Hey! I love your comic so much. It looks like there might be a typo in panel 5: "righous" Is that supposed to be "righteous"?

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October 23rd, 2014, 10:32 am

Larkie

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@Ty: Yes it supposed to be, thanks!

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October 23rd, 2014, 12:55 pm

Emor (Guest)

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Uh-oh, looks like Ziggy's losing control somehow!

And, I wasn't sure who's trigger finger was twitching in panel 8 (the last finger on a trigger we saw was in panel 3)...until I figured from panel 9 that maybe Ziggy was fading. Maybe switching panels 8 & 9 might work better?

Also, if you're fixing "righous", maybe you can fix "complarison" as well.

Don't worry about the guns' accuracy or detailing; that shouldn't be anyone's focal point here, really.

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October 26th, 2014, 2:14 am

Selbin (Guest)

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Also, this is humanity we're talking about. We make guns in all shapes and sizes! Even shapes and sizes that do not look like guns!

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September 29th, 2015, 6:02 pm

wohali (Guest)

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second typo on this page, "COMPLARISON". I'm going to interpret it as the guy being so scared he can't speak straight XD

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